Candle power

Well, haven't found my dance yet, but have written a nice little candle tribute for some children to say at their grandfather's funeral service.  Perhaps I've been too busy to "find my dance" (?).
Writing a eulogy for a man who has died too young...well, not a truly young man, but, at 58 years, I consider that way too young.
His 6 grandchildren will light candles, as the celebrant says:
(Names of the children)" .........as you light these  candles, they are a reminder of your loved Pop  -  your love for him and his for you.  The lights represent his life - and his courage throughout his illness  -   as they also represent  your courage and strength as you look to the future without
him.
These little candle-lights are lights to signify love....and to  remember".

That's nice, isn't it?  I hope the words help.